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Kimochi WIP

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Wip of my oc Kimochi ffff.

I've lacked any inspiration lately, so this kind of got me out.


time to finish some commissions and upload the done ones ughh.

critique if you know what you're talking about it greatly appreciated
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

okay I guess I know what I'm talking about? so here goes lol.

I'd like to say that she looks SO adorable! I love your style and this pic shows it off well <3

There are a few areas that could be looked at, they are minor but I'd still take these things into consideration.

first, I'd be careful with the lineart. it looks a little sketchy- though is this just another pencil/sketch layer? I'm not sure so I thought I'd mention it anyway;;

there's also the hair curls coming from the main body of the hair. they look good, though in my opinion there are maybe 1 or 2 too many, and they don't flow from the main body of the hair very well.

will she be wearing a pleated skirt/dress? if so, I wouldn't round the ends of the pleats so much. a little rounded can look cute, though too much and it can look unnatural.

anyway, like I said these things are minor so I wouldn't worry about them too much- they're just something to think about <3